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please correct below if it's wrong to describe what we do in our company? thanks for your help?

* Consultant and Interior design for shop, supermarket, apartment and villa * Partition for office supermarket and studio flat * Design ceiling * Design kitchen and bathroom (Latest designs in the world) * Design and repair inside decoration of boat and ship yes I mean about grammer, i haven't mentioned any company name so it can't be advertising on YA, :) thanks for your concern , please correct my mistakes

Public Comments

1. Hi, are you asking if this is a grammatically correct description? Like, if you were making up a brochure ? Or are you asking if it is wrong (like free advertising) to put your company description on YA ? If I had a better idea of what you're really want to know, I'd be happy to answer. =)
2. I would put it together a little more so not to be repetitive such as: Interior Design/Consultant Services . Home - including latest in kitchen and bath designs . Business - including cubicle design - Boat - interior repair and design
3. Use grammar/spell check. You have a lot of fragments there instead of sentences. Even with bullet points complete sentences gain more attention that fragments and are easier to comprehend. I would also keep residential/commercial aspects in respective bullets. You have two bullets that mention both residential and commercial aspects.